Week 4 Story: The Truth Behind Sugriva's Banishment

Two fighting brothers, Vali and Sugriva. Source: Wikimedia Commons
Surya, the God of Sun had two sons: Sugriva, and his elder power-hungry brother, Vali. Over their young years, Vali grew increasingly jealous of the charming and handsome Sugriva, who women always desired. Vali thought to himself, “They will surely desire me once I am the King!” Soon enough, upon the end of Surya’s reign, Vali was overjoyed to rule the kingdom of Kishkindha. Sugriva, during this time, fell in love with the beautiful Ruma. However, Ruma’s father did not approve of Sugriva for his daughter but actually favored unmarried Vali, whose prediction became a reality.

Sugriva begged Vali not to accept the offering to wed Ruma, the woman he adored. Vali refused and exclaimed, “Finally! I have everything and you are just left with your looks!” The heartbroken Sugriva prayed and prayed that a miracle of some sort would prevent the marriage between Vali and Ruma.

One day, a vicious demon attacked Vali and dragged him to the underworld. Vali was attacked by a vicious demon who dragged him to the underworld. Vali created an opening so that he would be able to return to Kishkindha once he defeated the demon.

Vali instructed Sugriva to prevent anyone from closing this entrance. The loyal Sugriva dedicated an entire year of standing guard until the piercing cries and pools of blood gushing out of the underworld’s mouth petrified Sugriva. The ear-splitting weeping resembled the voice of Vali and Sugriva assumed the demon killed him his brother. Sugriva suddenly realized maybe Vali’s death was the power of the gods listening to his prayer to prevent his brother’s marriage to his beloved Ruma. The news of Vali's death devastated Sugriva, who prayed for her brother's broken marriage Ruma without any malicious intent. After avidly attempting to call after Vali, no response followed, and Sugriva closed the opening he had been guarding and announced that Vali had perished.

Upon arrival, as disheartened as he was, Sugriva was still madly in love with Ruma and presumed since he was expected to succeed Vali in possession of Kishkindha, this served as validation for the two to finally wed each other.

It appears that Vali had actually not deceased but was successful in the battle against the demon. However, Sugriva horribly trapped Vali by closing the only means of departing the underworld. Vali assumed Sugriva acted this way purposefully in order to take possession of Kishkindha and of course, Ruma.

Spiteful Vali worked tirelessly to escape and eventually returned to Kishkindha, revealing an untruly exaggerated story of Sugriva’s intended torture to leave his own brother imprisoned in the underworld. Although Sugriva humbly yet unsuccessfully tried to explain himself, the entire kingdom was stunned to hear his despicable plot, even Ruma, who was hopelessly persuaded by Vali that Sugriva was in fact, evil. Thereafter, Vali banished Sugriva from Kishkindha.

Author’s Note

Source. Indian Myth and Legend by Donald A. Mackenzie.
My story mostly follows the original plot. Ruma was Sugriva’s wife. Vali accused Sugriva of betrayal, abducted Ruma, and banished Sugriva, who becomes the monkey king.

I chose to add a background story to provide more of an explanation for Vali’s persistent efforts to banish Sugriva. I figured making this a three-way love triangle, between Vali, Ruma, and Sugriva, might do the trick. I decided to leave Tara, who later marries Sugriva, out of the story because I wanted to focus on how his first love was taken away from him due to what could have just been a misunderstanding. Sugriva’s intentions were non-malicious. By making it seem like Sugriva had betrayed Vali, the entire kingdom agreed to banishing him, which was the same ending in the original story.

Comments

  1. Hey Naomee!
    Of course I remember you, glad to see you’re in this class as well!
    The background of this story really caught my eye, playing into the love triangle between two brothers and their desired wife was an awesome way to explain some of the brother’s disdain for one another. I had found myself upset in the original story with Vali being so angry at Sugriva, but this explains that detail and gives it context.
    I wonder if the storyline was lengthened and Sugriva stood watch for even longer before giving up hope if the kingdom would be more understanding, or if they would expect him to just stand watch until the end of time if that’s what it took. To me, it seems like one year of standing and waiting is pretty admirable, but it clearly was not enough for the kingdom to show loyalty.
    What if throughout the year, Sugriva faced trials while waiting for his brother? This could maybe add some dimension to Sugriva’s inner battle in deciding whether to stay or go, maybe he was facing constant monsters or some other difficulties while standing watch that made it harder for him to commit to staying any longer.
    Really great story, Naomee, I look forward to reading more of your stories!

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  2. Hi Naomee, I really liked your story! It was especially interesting and the love triangle did add a great twist to the original tale! Here are some suggestions for you: If the story was longer, you could possibly give an explanation to why Ruma believed Vali, and couldn't trust her husband, even though they went through everything together. Also, what if you changed the story up and make a version where Ruma did not believe Vali and she and Sugriva left together in exile. Another suggestion to make the story have a happier outcome would be to have a scene where Vali and Sugriva both talk out their misunderstandings and rule their kingdom as one unit, where Sugriva and Ruma are married and Vali falls in love with another woman that he runs into.
    This was a really good story and I am excited to read the other stories you write throughout the semester!

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